For your letter to Jesus to provide you with the most benefits it must be a stand-alone project. Your objective must be to let Jesus know why what you are telling him is important to you. This letter is not supposed to be about "Johnny" or "My JOB" or even about "LIFE!" No, No, NO.
It is YOUR feelings, your thoughts and your plans that are important in this project. This is YOUR letter to Jesus. Let "them" get their own press agent.
When we write a letter to Jesus we don't have to hold anything back. We can tell him exactly how we feel about anything that matters to us.
We will want to tell Jesus about all the bruises that have come our way, all the battering we are going through, and all the barriers we can see in our future and want to avoid.
Eloquence is not essential in our first attempts. What matters most is getting the facts out there on paper. Let the anguish of your soul penetrate your message and eloquence will be your natural derivative.